Passionate Nights

08/15/2011

Tonight

I go bare

Without inhibitions.

I trembled

As I surrendered

All that is in my heart.

Then you whispered

Anew

The depth of your love.

I soaked in the passion

I writhed

I arrived.

I grasped

That I am yours

My Lord.

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For Jingle Poetry on Passionate Nights of Love

For you. Who changed your life?

Enter within me

Revive the love in my heart

Take me, I am Yours

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For me. In total surrender.

πŸ™‚

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32 Responses to “Passionate Nights”


  1. amazing piece..powerful writing.

    keep it up.


  2. absolutely beautiful! thank you for sharing.


  3. Beautiful take on the theme. What could be more passionate than the love of the Lord. Blessings

  4. kez Says:

    well beautiful and full of passion…..thank you


  5. beautiful…sweet

  6. Debbie Says:

    Sweet Rea Son Shine . . .my, you out did yourself here with this one, this entire post. I simply love it. and you! God bless!

    • bendedspoon Says:

      Thank you Deb. And of course I’ll tell you the secret again — He made me write it. I thought of missing the challenge and so I go to bed — I go bare without inhibitions. I trembled as I surrendered all that is in my heart… πŸ™‚

  7. mariqia Says:

    Nice lyrics..a tremendous expression of love..:)


  8. Very beautiful!!:)


  9. “Enter within me

    Revive the love in my heart

    Take me, I am Yours”…

    What a wonderful prayer! And what a wonderful post! I really liked this part:

    “Tonight

    I go bare

    Without inhibitions.” The Lord encourages us to come boldly before His throne, and to cast all of our cares upon Him (go bare).

    I also really liked this part:

    “I arrived.

    I grasped

    That I am yours

    My Lord.”

    There are so many times when we fail to grasp…to arrive, but then there are those awesome moments when actually catch a glimpse of the significance of what it really means to be the Lord’s. πŸ™‚

    Thank you for this beautiful post.

    Love,
    Theresa

    • bendedspoon Says:

      Wowowee! You made it more meaningful Theresa! One of the reasons why I love everyone in here is because I am not only learning but I’m touched as well. Casting my cares upon Him πŸ™‚


  10. When we surrender it all… it all comes to us.
    This is beautiful both in its imagery and its content. Lovely!

  11. caridwen Says:

    This is great – very present and vital word choices, which bring the whole poem to life. Well done!

  12. Kay Salady Says:

    Absolutely beautiful. There is no greater passion than to love the Lord with all your mind, heart and strength. Blessings~

    • bendedspoon Says:

      And to think that I could have missed it totally. Glad that He pursued me and I got tired of ignoring Him. Blessings back to you πŸ™‚

  13. Andy Says:

    Hello.
    This is beautiful. There’s nothing like sweet surrender.

    Nicely done!

    Congratulations also on being featured in the special interview at Jingle Poetry!

    I’m here:
    Remove These Satin Sheets…

    • bendedspoon Says:

      Oh yes! He wooed me for quite sometime before I totally surrender πŸ˜‰

      I enjoyed that interview and I’m glad that there are some who appreciate the few words I got to share. Blessings to you πŸ™‚


  14. Nicely done. Very moving.

    Here’s my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/


  15. love it,

    very vivid imagery.


  16. Very nice Spoon! Who changed my life? Everybody I ever met..not always for the better but it makes me who I am. And fortunately I have always been Blessed which has kept me out of a lot of trouble,,


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