Passionate Nights
08/15/2011
Tonight
I go bare
Without inhibitions.
I trembled
As I surrendered
All that is in my heart.
Then you whispered
Anew
The depth of your love.
I soaked in the passion
I writhed
I arrived.
I grasped
That I am yours
My Lord.
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For Jingle Poetry on Passionate Nights of Love
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For you. Who changed your life?
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Enter within me
Revive the love in my heart
Take me, I am Yours
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For me. In total surrender.
π
08/19/2011 at 12:42 AM
amazing piece..powerful writing.
keep it up.
08/20/2011 at 6:50 PM
Thank you so much for appreciating. Blessings to you π
08/18/2011 at 1:00 AM
absolutely beautiful! thank you for sharing.
08/20/2011 at 6:49 PM
The passionate bride is here! Your passion is oozing π
08/16/2011 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful take on the theme. What could be more passionate than the love of the Lord. Blessings
08/16/2011 at 10:15 PM
Just when we thought that we can only be passionate with another human being, the Lord offers sooo much more. Huggggs π
08/16/2011 at 7:20 PM
well beautiful and full of passion…..thank you
08/16/2011 at 10:13 PM
Made me wonder of the joy felt by those whose passion is much much much more than mine. Blessings to you π
08/16/2011 at 3:28 PM
beautiful…sweet
08/16/2011 at 10:08 PM
The experience is really beautiful… Bless you π
08/16/2011 at 10:52 AM
Sweet Rea Son Shine . . .my, you out did yourself here with this one, this entire post. I simply love it. and you! God bless!
08/16/2011 at 10:01 PM
Thank you Deb. And of course I’ll tell you the secret again — He made me write it. I thought of missing the challenge and so I go to bed — I go bare without inhibitions. I trembled as I surrendered all that is in my heart… π
08/16/2011 at 8:31 AM
Nice lyrics..a tremendous expression of love..:)
08/16/2011 at 9:53 PM
Yup. Moved me so much — to Him. Huggggs π
08/16/2011 at 8:19 AM
Very beautiful!!:)
08/16/2011 at 9:51 PM
He is and you too. Blessings π
08/16/2011 at 6:04 AM
“Enter within me
Revive the love in my heart
Take me, I am Yours”…
What a wonderful prayer! And what a wonderful post! I really liked this part:
“Tonight
I go bare
Without inhibitions.” The Lord encourages us to come boldly before His throne, and to cast all of our cares upon Him (go bare).
I also really liked this part:
“I arrived.
I grasped
That I am yours
My Lord.”
There are so many times when we fail to grasp…to arrive, but then there are those awesome moments when actually catch a glimpse of the significance of what it really means to be the Lord’s. π
Thank you for this beautiful post.
Love,
Theresa
08/16/2011 at 9:46 PM
Wowowee! You made it more meaningful Theresa! One of the reasons why I love everyone in here is because I am not only learning but I’m touched as well. Casting my cares upon Him π
08/16/2011 at 3:18 AM
When we surrender it all… it all comes to us.
This is beautiful both in its imagery and its content. Lovely!
08/16/2011 at 9:41 PM
…it all comes to us. Hmm I love that! I feel the blessings and the love coming. Coming your way too π
08/16/2011 at 1:19 AM
This is great – very present and vital word choices, which bring the whole poem to life. Well done!
08/16/2011 at 9:37 PM
Thank you and blessings to you. The moment is real. The nights are many. The passion will keep on burning π
08/16/2011 at 1:13 AM
Absolutely beautiful. There is no greater passion than to love the Lord with all your mind, heart and strength. Blessings~
08/16/2011 at 9:34 PM
And to think that I could have missed it totally. Glad that He pursued me and I got tired of ignoring Him. Blessings back to you π
08/16/2011 at 12:52 AM
Hello.
This is beautiful. There’s nothing like sweet surrender.
Nicely done!
Congratulations also on being featured in the special interview at Jingle Poetry!
I’m here:
Remove These Satin Sheets…
08/16/2011 at 9:31 PM
Oh yes! He wooed me for quite sometime before I totally surrender π
I enjoyed that interview and I’m glad that there are some who appreciate the few words I got to share. Blessings to you π
08/16/2011 at 12:02 AM
Nicely done. Very moving.
Here’s my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/
08/16/2011 at 9:25 PM
His love letters are awesome and the dates touched my soul π
08/15/2011 at 11:45 PM
love it,
very vivid imagery.
08/16/2011 at 9:22 PM
Thank you. You encouraged me to join — I hesitated but here it is. Blessings to you π
08/15/2011 at 10:30 PM
Very nice Spoon! Who changed my life? Everybody I ever met..not always for the better but it makes me who I am. And fortunately I have always been Blessed which has kept me out of a lot of trouble,,
08/16/2011 at 9:18 PM
Beautiful — for seeing the value of each person you encountered. More blessings are coming your way π