Cornerless Field


Image from Bluebells Books: Short Story Slam Week 8


Her heart was messy.

Her dream was broken.

She only dreamed of four happy corners and still it was taken away.

“God, I do not deserve this.”

“Yes, you do not deserve that,” replied God. “You deserve so much more.”

“I dream for you not only four happy corners but cornerless field that touches the sky.”

“All is yours but not all can be yours unless you choose to see all of it.”

“You cannot see it by just looking to the left and what is just left.”

“You cannot see it by just looking to the right and claiming that you are always right.”

“You cannot see it by just looking down and putting yourself down.”

“You cannot see it by just looking up and believe that I am only up there.”

“I am everywhere. I am especially with you. You could try seeing all around you — with my eyes.”

Her heart is merry.



28 Responses to “Cornerless Field”

  1. Morning Says:

    this is great.
    you got the talent, smiles.


  2. hannah Says:

    beautiful and inspiring. may i reblog?

  3. This is such a beautiful and fabulous poem of God and especially would benefit children and their youthful ceaseless inquiry! Thanks for sharing this!

  4. beautiful imagery… well done 🙂

  5. This was so wonderful!


  6. Your words always brighten my day. You have such a faith-filled message, adn that is a good thing!

    My week 8 story:

  7. profound, thanks for sharing,


  8. Debbie Says:

    What a wonderful, powerful, Jesus-full piece! Thank you for writing and sharing and for being you!
    love you!

  9. maggsworld Says:

    I love happy endings.

  10. mish Says:

    An inspirational and uplifting message for all to ponder and enjoy – thank you for sharing these gems !

  11. West Lake Says:

    love the wisdom/insights in it, well done.


  12. NIce write. With a happy ending as well.

  13. Wow what tremendous words…love it!

  14. Chatter Master Says:

    God speak does make a heart merry! 🙂

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