Don’t Hide
07/23/2011
Image from Bluebell Books Short Story Slam Week 6
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“You don’t have to hide behind my back. It will be alright,” Digna the dog appeased her new found friend Emphie the elephant.
“What if they laugh at me because of my enormous nose? My huge legs? And my jumbo butt?”
“What if they like you because of your awesome nose? Your strong legs? And your…your jumbo butt?”
As they come near to the meadow, Emphie could see Digna’s playmates dancing, laughing, and having a good time.
“Hello everyone! Sorry I’m late,” Digna apologized.
“You’re late and you’re dead! There’s an elephant behind you! Run! Everybody runnnnnnn!”
“Wait! You don’t have to be scared with Emphie. Please stay.”
“What if that beast hit us with her enormous nose? Kick us with her huge legs?”
“And what about her jumbo…jumbo butt?” As soon as the words were out, the dogs can’t control their laughter, “Bowwowwahahahaha!”
“Digna, I told you…,” Emphie sadly whispered.
“Please stop it! You’re hurting Emphie. She actually doesn’t want to come here because you might laugh at her and she’s right. Just because she’s big doesn’t mean we should be scared of her or laugh at her. Doesn’t it occur to you to you that she could actually be the scared one? The shy one?”
“She is?!”
Swoosh swoosh swoosh…
“This is so much fun Emphie! I love swinging in your awesome nose!”
“And running around your strong legs!”
“And how I wish I have your jumbo butt and paint it with rainbow and put a smile on everybody’s lips!”
Emphie smiled. Her heart smiled. She knew it’s one of her loveliest smiles.
“You don’t have to hide behind my back. It will be alright,” Emphie appeased her new found friend Digna. “There’s no ghost but magic under the stars.”
🙂
08/05/2011 at 11:08 PM
you got infinite potential, keep it up.
hope to see and read your week 7 entry.
cheers,
08/06/2011 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement 🙂
08/01/2011 at 1:17 AM
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07/30/2011 at 1:45 PM
Such beautiful words, moral and narrative. It moved my heart and bought a smile to my eye. If only we all had a Digna to tell us not to hide.
The Lonely Recluse.
07/31/2011 at 10:42 PM
If we can be Digna, it’s as good as having Digna tell us, “Come out and shine”. Thank you for that smile in your eye! Blessings to you 🙂
07/26/2011 at 11:33 AM
Such a sweet tale 🙂
07/27/2011 at 6:48 PM
Sweet whenever there’s an effort to set aside differences and appreciate each other. Blessings to you 🙂
07/25/2011 at 12:25 AM
A wonderful story and even more nice because your children had some input. You all came up with important lessons for us to remember about each other. Love the “jumbo butt” part!
07/25/2011 at 6:30 PM
Thank you so much from the jumbo buttom of our hearts!
Hearing what each of my kiddos learned from the story is special too 🙂
07/24/2011 at 3:01 PM
Such a lovely story, with a most powerful message! It brought to mind the adage, “Don’t judge a book by ts cover.” Man looks upon the outward appearance, but God looks into the heart of man. May we all strive to be more like the Lord.
May the Lord bless you and your little ones, richly! 🙂
Paulette
07/25/2011 at 6:14 PM
Yes, the cover alone may not be telling the entire story. Grateful that God looks into the heart of man else I might just be another unnoticed book in the shelf.
Huggs and blessings to you — from me and the kiddos! 🙂
07/24/2011 at 7:29 AM
This is such an important message ~ we may be different but we all have something special and unique to contribute to society ! Well done !
07/24/2011 at 9:33 AM
So true! Something special and unique to contribute — that we need not hide. Blessings to you 🙂
07/24/2011 at 1:58 AM
Awww such a sweet and happy ending. So relieved for Emphie!
07/24/2011 at 9:31 AM
Yup! Self-doubt could crept even to the biggest, strongest, most powerful, most famous…Respect and understanding for everyone 🙂
07/24/2011 at 12:02 AM
A delightful way to subtly present a powerful message!
07/24/2011 at 9:26 AM
Thank you for appreciating the message therein. Blessings to you 🙂
07/23/2011 at 9:12 PM
More friends made – even with a jumbo butt! 😀
I love this sweet, empathetic story. Thanks for sharing. My attempt at the prompt is here:
http://paulatohlinecalhoun1951.wordpress.com/2011/07/23/walking-each-other-home/
07/24/2011 at 9:25 AM
Thank you for appreciating. Real friends see beyond butt, even if they are watching each other’s back 🙂
07/23/2011 at 8:22 PM
Thank you, Princess Rea
I like this much and the story behind it makes it even more special 😉
Kudos to you and the little ones 🙂
Blessings much
ann
07/24/2011 at 9:21 AM
Ann, I enjoyed hearing the thoughts of each of my kiddos. There was an orphan dog, a dog with pet elephant, an elephant bully. How I wish I can write real good and capture their imagination. Maybe they can, they can start trying 🙂
07/23/2011 at 6:15 PM
We can learn much when we welcome others in.
Outstanding story!
07/24/2011 at 9:10 AM
Sooo much! Not only learn but appreciate how special each person is. I love you girl 🙂
07/23/2011 at 5:15 PM
Lovely well written story, I enjoyed it very much 🙂
07/24/2011 at 9:08 AM
Glad you enjoyed. Blessings to you 🙂
07/23/2011 at 4:41 PM
Such a special story and all the more so because you wrote it with your kiddos! 🙂 I love that! And you!
07/24/2011 at 9:07 AM
Really special Deb. First, they said wow when I showed them the photo then I said, “Can we make a short story out of that?” When I heard “Okay!” and saw their smiles, I knew I’ll have another precious moment to thank for. I’m so in love with life yesterday, to so many…and today and the next. Cheesy with love 🙂
07/23/2011 at 12:42 PM
we should all be thankful for our blessings and learn to appreciate ..only then we can share it and welcome the gift of friendship…
thank you for the inspiration..keep on writing…
07/24/2011 at 8:53 AM
I totally agree with that. An attitude of gratitude can do so much good! Hugggs and love 🙂
07/23/2011 at 10:40 AM
This was a wonderful story with a great message! 🙂
Love,
Theresa
07/23/2011 at 1:04 PM
Theresa there is so much truth in that story about myself, and yours? 😉
07/23/2011 at 10:37 AM
Good use of the prompt and a great lesson for any child.
07/23/2011 at 1:03 PM
The kiddos and I had fun with this prompt. Each of us shared ideas and came up with this. This is special because of the precious time spent with them 🙂
07/23/2011 at 10:30 AM
A wonderful tale about a loving, supporting friendship. Very nice!
07/23/2011 at 12:58 PM
Friendship is one of the blessings one could have. So thankful for my friends. Blessings to you 🙂
07/23/2011 at 10:28 AM
sometimes, we lack confidence to feel wanted and beautiful,
impressive one, thanks for the treat.
07/23/2011 at 12:53 PM
So true especially if we rely on other people’s opinion. Blessings to you 🙂